Wednesday, May 4, 2011

San Diego County Third-Person Paragraph

When poeple go to the beach, they usually go with a group of friends or their family. Many people bring big umbrellas, beach towels, snacks, and alot of people BBQ. When they first get there, they set up with umbrellas and coolers, and make sure sand won't get in their stuff, and then they hit the water. after swimming and having fun in the water for a while, they dry off, and go back to the spot they set up at because many people drift away with the current unknowingly. Then they all socialize and have a good time eating. After that, poeple may go back in the water or build sand castles, or just hang out and tan. thats what a normal day at the beach looks like.

4 comments:

  1. I did the same topic, nice work you should add a picture.

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  2. Good job mary keep up the good work.

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  3. You kept it all in third-person. :-) This post makes me want to go to the beach.

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  4. Oh so thats how it works, I totally didn't know that.

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